The genesis of The
Chronicle of Eboracum was extraordinarily simple. Having realised that my writing
was becoming increasingly disjointed I decided that something drastic had to be
done. I needed to write a story that had an ending. A simple feat you might
think, aside from the debilitating panic that consumes me whenever I consider
creating any form of conclusion. After many long walks to work, several delayed
train journeys, and writing primarily on the back of till receipts, I had
finally a severely disjointed but almost complete story.
Though primarily a work of utter fantasy this story is also akin
to Frankenstein’s monster. It includes a patchwork of half-remembrances,
obscure facts and more than a little desperation. Eboracum was the name of the Roman settlement which developed into
the city we know today as York. Wallachia
was the name of the kingdom that Vlad the Impaler ruled during the Middle Ages.
Medieval bestiaries described the pard
as a creature that could kill with a single leap. Meanwhile Costica was my exhausted brain latching
onto the discarded coffee cup of a fellow traveller. There is also an actual
plant called the Peruvian Sheep Eater (puya
chilensis), which has recently bloomed at the RHS garden Wisley in Surrey, and
acts in exactly the manner I described.
Am I pleased with my monstrous creation? There are so many
things that ought to be better, so many ways it is inferior, and so many parts
that are incomplete. Yet for the half-crazed scribbling of an author who seemingly
cannot write the words THE END it is not an entirely bad effort. Whilst it may
not be perfect my one hope is that it will help make the next story that much less
painful to see to its proper conclusion.
Part Five – The New
Age The battle may have been won but there was still much that
needed to be achieved before a quarter-century of Wallachian control could be
entirely put to an end. Regents were installed and temporary governments
elected as the western kingdoms sought to regain their independence. With the
old ruling families annihilated by Aefon’s murderous ambitions it was not possible
to return to the old way of things. Instead the liberated kingdoms celebrated and
looked forward to the beginning of a new age. There were also intense negotiations between Wallachia and
the Lords. After the general’s demise on the Field of Firrs it was the mother
of the boy-king who ruled in his stead. Fierce and proud she nevertheless
understood that her husband’s armies had crumbled and the allied forces had
chosen not to destroy Wallachia. The western kingdoms had no interest in
domination. There were many voices of reason who insisted that no revenge would
be enacted. The people of Wallachia were, in the main, innocent of the
atrocities committed by Aefon and his generals. Negotiations remained ongoing for
the settlement of suitable reparations and there was cautious discussion of a
universal peace treaty. For Benedik, however, the end of the battle signalled more
simply the return home. He spent many hours on the rocky cliffs of his
childhood watching the waves below crash and recede. He should not have been
surprised, he supposed, to find that nature had not changed in his absence. When
he had begun this journey he had decided to leave as soon as the fight was won.
The people of Eboracum may have needed his martial prowess but they would be
better off without him as king. Yet as the days passed he reacquainted himself
with old friends, drank toasts to the prosperity of the kingdom and visited the
unmarked burial place of his family. It seemed that he had constructed a life
for himself here and the endless wandering within his soul felt finally at
peace. The Guardian had spoken the truth when she told him that he
had needed to return. He smiled wryly to himself as he flicked his wrist and
sent one of the stones in his hand tumbling down into the white spray of water. “You will stay then?” It was as if he had summoned her with
his thoughts. For a moment he continued to study the small rock in the palm of
his hand, smoothing its rough surface with the pad of his thumb. He gave a great
deal of thought to the equally small word before he gave it voice. “Yes.” He turned to her, his eyes blinking furiously to
adjust to the supernatural brightness that surrounded the Guardian. “I don’t
know who I shall be or what I shall do, but whatever it is I belong here to
this land.” His hand flattened to the ground as if he could feel the very
heartbeat of the earth beneath him. “Thank you.” They were foolish words
perhaps when spoken to a deity but they were honest ones. “You saved my life
all those years ago and you came back for me. I see now that somehow I could never
have stopped waiting or hoping.” “You exceeded all our expectations. Your father always
believed you would become greater than merely your name. In these past weeks you
have proven yourself your own man. Greatness cannot be inherited nor is it a
title. Everything that you are comes from within.”She laid a cool and gentle
hand on his shoulder, the comfort easing through his bones like water. Her gown
brushed across his arm as she turned and left, leaving an air of serenity in
her wake. Evening had arrived in Eboracum whilst Benedik had been
meditating the future on the shoreline. There was a festival in full swing when
he returned to the city. The people were dressed in their finery, no matter how
shabby or outdated it had become in the intervening years. Food and wine
rationing had been suspended for the night and everyone enjoyed the plentiful
feast to its fullest. He wove amongst the excited revellers and dancers, acknowledging
their greetings with a friendly if somewhat distracted smile. He was close to
the entrance of the royal citadel when he was stopped by an old friend. Viridian
had been the son of a wealthy merchant and together they had got up to all
sorts of pranks and mischief as boys. They had already slipped easily back into
their old routine. “Benedik! – Come my friend, have a drink.” “Not yet. I have something I need to do first.” Viridian
frowned, his handsome face flushed from too much of the fine wine. “No!” He exclaimed petulantly, slinging a heavy arm across
his friend’s shoulders. “Tonight there’s nothing more important to do than
decide which girl you want to go home with.” He said winking meaningfully. “I
reckon you’ve got a good chance, what with being the hero of Eboracum.” “Later. I promise. But I want to make an announcement
first.” Benedik distracted his friend with a fresh and over-filled goblet
before making his escape. Once he had reached the throne room, however, he
began to wish he’d had that drink. Up until now he had managed to avoid entering the room. The
last time he had stood there his family’s blood had stained the stone-flagged
floor. He could still remember his mother’s lifeless body spread heavily across
his younger siblings as she had fruitlessly attempted to protect them. Yet as
he confronted the darkness it was clear that the room was not the monster he
had created in his memories. It was an echoing shell, gutted by the Wallachian principals
who had governed in Aefon’s place. Little was recognisable of the chamber in
which he had also learnt at his father’s feet about duty, honour and courage. Time
had wrought its changes on this room as visibly as it had on him. Benedik
breathed deeply, settling the jangling of his nerves and trembling of his
fingers. It was time to look forward to the future instead of constantly
looking back. Stepping out onto the royal balcony he quietly watched the
revellers below him for several minutes. As a few faces started to turn and
look up curiously at him, Benedik began to address the crowd. “Citizens of Eboracum!” His voice carried in the stillness
of the night air. A few of the more vocal members of the gathering gave a cheer
at his appearance. He suspected that Viridian was amongst them. They were
hushed impatiently by the others. “I want to thank you. Without each and every
one of you we would not be here to celebrate tonight. A new age is dawning
throughout the western kingdoms and we are a part of that change. My father was
a great king, but I am not my father. I will not rule as his successor simply
because I carry his name. Eboracum will be free to choose its king on merit.”
He trailed off, realising that he had been gripping the balustrade fiercely with
white knuckles. Pushing away from the railings he had half turned when there
was a loud cry from amongst the crowd. “King Benedik!” The single voice was joined by three and
then ten others as the cry spread until finally it deafened him. He was to be the
king that the people had chosen. There would of course still be many intricacies
to cope with come the morning, but for now Benedik allowed the tears to flow
unchecked. This was not the end of his journey, which he had begun so many
weeks before as the Nomad, but merely the beginning of a new chronicle for
himself and for Eboracum.
Men had continued arriving throughout the night to add their
strength to the allied forces. Now, as Benedik surveyed the field he had chosen
as their place to stand and fight, he felt a surge of pride. The rising sun burnished
the soldiers below him in heroic streaks of gold and bronze. The dazzling light
bounced off their polished armour, fracturing into thousands of tiny new suns.
The Council had ultimately accepted his audacious plan of
attack. The western kingdoms simply did not have the luxury of time. He had
been granted the captaincy of the army, yet he was fully aware of the weight of
assessment that remained in the gazes of the Lords. At least now he looked more
like the western prince he claimed to be. Cleanly shaven, hair cropped short
and clothed in an opulent robe, the only lingering evidence of the Nomad’s
previous existence was the giant’s sword strapped to his back.
The Lords were arranged across the peak of the cliff. From
there they had an unbroken view of the battlefield before them. Each Lord was
mounted and adjacent to a bannerman who carried their kingdom’s sigil. These
beckoned in the light breeze to the forces below, a clear visual reminder of what
the men fought for and what they stood to lose. Benedik tugged uncomfortably at
the gold-braided neck of his robe. He understood the necessity of the spectacle
but he did not feel like he belonged within it. With firm, impatient fingers he
unfastened the laces of his robe. Shrugging the heavy purple cloth from his
shoulders it carelessly folded itself on the ground.
“Right. Give me that.” He ordered tersely to his startled
bannerman. He lifted his father’s sigil easily, controlling the restlessness of
his horse with a single capable hand on the reins. As they turned about he
caught the shrewd glance of Lord Tobin. There was both consent and respect in
the old man’s swift nod. Benedik would never be content to be a mere symbol. Men
were going to spill their blood today because he had ordered that it ought to
be so. The least he could do was go down there and spill his own beside them.
By the time he had descended from the rocky outcrop to reach
the Field of Firrs, the battle had begun in earnest. He found himself trapped
in the midst of intense fighting. Drawing his sword he hacked at the infantry
that swarmed around him. From the benefit of his higher angle he could cut down
at their exposed necks, but equally they could strike out at his more
vulnerable mount. Spurring his horse forward he used the momentum to knock
aside the remaining men and force a path toward the front line.
When he finally reached the vanguard of the allied army he
punched his father’s sigil into the soil and dismounted to stand beside it. He
handed the reins to the first injured man who crossed his path, his focus never
shifting from the attacking Wallachians. He could feel the stares of men from
both sides upon him. Taking advantage of their awareness he made a rousing call.
“For my father! For Eboracum!” It was as much an
introduction as it was a battle-cry. Benedik was satisfied that he had made his
point through the conspicuous placement of banner and choice of words. In
proclaiming his identity he had bolstered the morale of his army, whilst
encouraging a confrontation from the enemy. He had seen how evenly matched the
two sides were and recognised that a more personal combat was required if the
battle was to be ended efficiently.
Benedik quickly lost track of time as he was forced to parry
and thrust. He felt almost disconnected, both from the inhumanity of the casual
slaughter, and from the soldiers who fought around him. Each man was engaged in
their own private war, exerting and driving themselves to extraordinary feats
for their own individual ends. The sky had gradually darkened during the course
of the fighting. Thunder fractured like pieces of broken pottery, whilst the
gods shrouded the battlefield in dense, heavy clouds which wept with their
tears.
Blinking fiercely at the rain that ran across his face and
burned his eyes, Benedik sensed the change before he saw it. A knight entirely
protected by black armour walked directly through the clashing pairs of
soldiers towards him. Instinctively he knew that this was the pivotal
confrontation for which he had hoped. The chest plate was etched with the
Wallachian royal arms and there were obscenely large jewels encrusted in the
pommel of the knight’s sword. This was the leader of the enemy army and the
single hope for decisively ending the battle.
The black knight circled Benedik, his sword sounding like a
snarl as it came free from its sheath. There was little time for evaluation as
his first blow came fast and was powerfully crushing. Benedik was surprised by
the formidable strength of the knight. Their blades sparked dangerously as they
clashed, Benedik raising his in order to relieve the pressure on his armour. He
was clad only in the lightest of mail, preferring its easy suppleness of
movement. However against the brute strength of the knight’s plate armour, it
was as useless as gossamer silk.
As they sparred Benedik found himself losing ground against
the unrelenting force of the black knight. His sword-arm had been nicked by the
knight’s blade as it buried beneath the iron rivets of his armour. Though only
a superficial wound it weakened the power with which he was able to swing the
giant’s sword. His swipes became ever more desperate and off-centre as he tried
to regain the upper hand. It was perhaps arrogance or overconfidence that
eventually led the black knight to pause for an instant before taking his final
killing blow.
An instant was all that Benedik needed.
As the sword came slashing across he threw his weight
forward, sliding in the rain-dampened earth, and taking advantage of the inflexibility
of the black knight’s heavy armour. On his knees he withdrew the knife
concealed in his boot and stabbed it through the knight’s foot. Momentarily
disabled, it gave Benedik enough time to come up behind the knight and slide
his sword through the gap in the black armour. It was a small blemish in an
otherwise faultless piece of artistry. He had only seen it as the rain gathered
and collected to drip and slide down the polished plates. Keening in pain the
black knight attempted to wrench the sword from his shoulder. Benedik exerted
enough steady pressure, however, to force the knight to his knees. Yanking at
the crested helm he unveiled his opponent.
“End this.” The older man’s voice was slurred and almost
unintelligible. Blood bubbled from his lips, choking his words. Benedik struck
quickly, slicing through nerves so as to render a fast and painless death. He
gazed down at the knight who had been the general of the Wallachian army and
had won countless battles alongside Aefon. The boy-child might have been
Aefon’s heir, but it was the general who the army had really followed. The
black knight had been right – it was time to end this.
Striding forward Benedik plunged his sword into the ground
beside his father’s banner and raised the severed head of the black knight up
high.
“Listen to me!” He called over the clamour of battle. The
men nearest him stopped, confused and startled by the intrusion into their
blood lust. The sudden cease in the fighting spread like ripples in a lake
until all was quiet apart from the distant clanging and yells in the
background. “Wallachian’s your leader is dead.” His hand and arm were stained
red from the blood that seeped from his gruesome prize. “Your general fought
with great courage, but the boy who sits on your throne is incapable of taking
his place. You cannot win this battle and you will not win this war.” Benedik remained
unarmed and open to attack, yet nobody moved to intercept him. “I’m offering
you your lives today. Choose peace now and you can return to your homes. If you
continue to fight, however, I promise you no mercy.” His face was implacable
and his hand steady, only his heart beat wildly as he awaited their decision. He
could at first sense only suspicion and distrust, yet as the sky began to clear
above them he could feel the delicate and tentative growth of new hope.