With the medieval
seeming a whole lot like work at the moment, here’s an opening chapter in the
style of a standard Americanised crime/thriller, written with very little
actual knowledge of modern day law and order.
Autumn had got a jump on them this year. A few weeks before
and the morning light would have already heralded the start of a new day, but
now the street lamps had only just begun to wink out and all that was promised
were the long and dark nights ahead. She shoved her chilled fingers into the
meagre protection of her jacket pockets as her impatient stride ate up the
pavement coloured copper by fallen leaves. The brisk walk and cool slap of air
were a deliberate choice to cleanse the remnants of the nightmare from which
she had been woken. Once the instinctive jolt of fear had ebbed she would be
ready to confront death again.
For Detective Isobel Martin violent death was an everyday
reality. She had thought after all her years on the job she had seen the worst
that human beings could do to one another. Yet there were still depths of evil
to be plumbed, as her last case had so savagely reminded her. Her pace hitched
slightly as she took a deep breath and forced herself to focus on the new crime
scene that lay ahead. Nothing about her appearance betrayed any of the loss in
confidence she may have felt. The grey of her eyes remained as impenetrable as
the fog that dampened the air. An untidy halo of pale waves framed a strongly
angular and determined face. Her slim, athletic form was straight and dignified
beneath the plain outfit of cotton and denim. Nodding efficiently she held up
her identification and passed beneath the tape.
It was a busy crime scene, despite the early hour. Half the
city’s press were already braying on their doorstop intermingled with the
crowds of curious and gawping. Death always liked to have an audience. Isobel
frowned at the proximity of the crowd, but she could see that the uniforms had
done their best to push them back. The out of hours phone call from her captain
had been enough to alert her that this case was going to be both sensitive and played
out in public. Screens had been erected to preserve the area and she could see
the flash of the photographers cataloguing the scene beyond and the crouching
shadow of the medical examiner. There were a lot of personnel on site,
indicating that she hadn’t been the only one to receive a call. One nameless figure
stood frozen and she felt an answering tug of pity and understanding.
“If you’re going spew the contents of your gut Officer,
would you kindly do it away from my crime scene and those damned cameras.” She addressed
the young man sharply, his uniform she noted still bore the shine of the
Academy. He coloured violently, but her words had at least shaken the glazed
horror from his youthful eyes.
“Tactful as ever I see.” The familiar amused voice had her
fighting to keep the scowl from her face. She turned on an abrupt heel to confront Detective
Frederick Thorne. Elegantly masculine in a three-piece suit he was the poster
boy for the police department. His dark hair was swept artfully back from a
face that smiled all too easily. Suave charm, however, disguised the perceptive
intelligence of a good detective.
“What the hell are you doing here?” She didn’t pretend to be
anything but annoyed. She’d managed to avoid him for several months. The last
time they’d closed a case together there had been far too much alcohol, far fewer
clothes and what could only be described as a bolt on her part. It only annoyed
her further that the thought now occurred that she wouldn’t mind seeing him
naked again.
“I got a call the same as you I imagine. Our murder is
politically...delicate, shall we say.” Her eyes narrowed at the implication of
his words. Though her tough bluntness was well respected, he had clearly been
assigned as her partner for this case because diplomacy was required. “Darling
Isobel –”
“Call me that again Thorne and I can promise you that your
face won’t end up looking quite as pretty as it does now.” She struggled to
contain the instinctive flare of aggression at his soft endearment. Even she was
aware that the media would have a field day with a public disagreement between
the primary investigators.
“You know there is something undeniably attractive about hot-headed
females.” His arrogant smile definitely became more of a smirk and she rolled
her eyes.
“Bite me.”
“There is nothing that would give me greater pleasure. Where
would you like me to start?” He was left with the last word for her attempt at
a fierce retort was cut off by the medical examiner’s efforts to gain their
attention.
“Detectives! You’re going to want to see this.”
Smug was the only word to describe Thorne’s expression as he
turned away and ambled toward the smartly polished doctor. Isobel did not
immediately follow him, taking instead a moment to settle the nerves that had
jerked to attention with the medical examiner’s ambiguous statement. The
protective gloves remained clenched in her fist, her fingers playing restlessly
with the rubber until it split. Murder was never clean, but there were some scenes
that were worse than others. The mutilations from her previous case were still
fresh enough in her mind to disrupt her sleep and trigger waves of clammy
nausea. A shrink would undoubtedly tell her to take some time out, but work
helped to push the lingering fear aside. Reaching for control now she allowed
herself a pause to finish observing her surroundings.
Extra attentive in order to justify her lapse she saw
something that had originally been overlooked. The face towards the back of the
crowd was neither shocked nor curious. It was pale and anxious with a sheen of
sweat and a knowing look in the eye. Instinct told her that he wasn’t the
perpetrator of the crime, but he was probably a witness. Edging away, she made
her approach stealthy and casual in order not to spook him. The sudden loud
hail from a uniform made her wince. Her gaze met and held the panicked wide
eyes of the suspect. He ran as if someone had sounded a starting gun.
“Shit.” She muttered with frustration before breaking off in
swift pursuit.
The man was nimble, she gave him that. He weaved a route
through the crowd and then amongst stationary cars before nipping down a back
alley and shoving over a garbage bin to disrupt her path. Essentially she was
fitter and faster than him, but the obstacles presented by city streets and
deserted buildings only increased the likelihood of his escape.
A door was slammed shut in her face and the impact of her
booted foot on the lock made little impression. Racing for the stairs she
hurdled two or three at a time until she reached an exit. Bursting out onto a
fire escape her eyes tracked the man’s course calculating that the delay had
almost definitely cost her a witness. Undeterred she continued to charge full
pelt down the rickety metal structure. Surprised she watched as her quarry
halted mid flight and began to move back toward her. Confusion turned to
irritation as she realised that Thorne had also pursued and now blocked the
man’s exit. Seizing the opportunity, however, she leapt from the final platform
and tackled the suspect to the ground. They both bounced and tumbled on the
hard concrete and she grimaced as her knee took the brunt of the fall. The man
struggled beneath her, lashing out with hands like claws. Exasperated she
clipped him in the jaw with a solid fist.
“You crazy cop
bitch.” He spat around a fat lip, his earlier anxiety melting beneath anger and
the heat of pain. Isobel examined the rip in her jeans and the drops of his
blood that now patterned her shirt. For the first time that morning she felt
her spirits rise.
“That’s Detective Bitch to you, asshole.”
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